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Assessment1by Amit DahalSubmission date: 28-Mar-2021 11:44PM (UTC+1100)Submission ID: 1544289035File name: Amit_Dahal_18898545_Risk_Analysis_Reform_final.docx (48.58K)Word count: 1005Character count: 58331Article ErrorFrag.Frag.Frag.1Frag.Article ErrorArticle ErrorArticle ErrorMeaning unclearArticle ErrorArticle ErrorPrep.Article ErrorArticle Error11234515%SIMILARITY INDEX9%INTERNET SOURCES3%PUBLICATIONS15%STUDENT PAPERS1 5%2 3%3 3%4 2%5 1%Exclude quotes OffExclude bibliography OffExclude matches < 6 wordsAssessment1ORIGINALITY REPORTPRIMARY SOURCESSubmitted to University of Western SydneyStudent PaperSubmitted to La Trobe UniversityStudent PaperSubmitted to Massachusetts College ofPharmacy & Allied Health SciencesStudent PaperSubmitted to Coventry UniversityStudent PaperSubmitted to Herzing UniversityStudent PaperFINAL GRADE19/30Assessment1GRADEMARK REPORTGENERAL COMMENTSInstructorYour consequence ratings are high,I would like to see the risk of failure to achieveincreased uptake of insurance included.you applied the matrix appropriately,assignment of accountability could have beenmore specific.PP 2/04/21PAGE 1Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the articlethe.Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread thesentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clausewith a complete subject and predicate.Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread thesentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clausewith a complete subject and predicate.Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread thesentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clausewith a complete subject and predicate.QMPAGE 2Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread thesentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clausewith a complete subject and predicate.Article Error You may need to remove this article.Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the articlethe.PAGE 3Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.Meaning unclearYour meaning is unclear. Read your sentences out loud as you finish writing each paragraphto make sure that what you have written makes sense. Visit the ‘Finishing and submitting’section of the Study Smart website(http://westernsydney.edu.au/studysmart/home/assignment_help/writing) and download theresource on Proofreading(http://westernsydney.edu.au/__data/assets/pdf_file/0010/1082683/Proofreading.pdf) toensure you hand in your best work.Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.Article Error You may need to remove this article.PAGE 4Article Error You may need to remove this article.PAGE 5RUBRIC: HSP_RUBRIC_ASS1CRITERION 1 (20%)HIGH DISTINCTION+(5)HIGH DISTINCTION(4.50)DISTINCTION+(4)DISTINCTION(3.75)CREDIT+(3.50)CREDIT(3)PASS+(2.75)PASS(2.50)UNSATISFACTORY+(2)UNSATISFACTORY(1)CRITERION 2 (20%)HIGH DISTINCTION+(5)HIGH DISTINCTION(4.50)DISTINCTION+(4)DISTINCTION(3.75)CREDIT+(3.50)3.20 / 52.75 / 5Comprehensive estimation of risksProvides a comprehensive list of all risks; Clearly articulates the various kinds ofassociated riskProvides a comprehensive list of all risks; Clearly articulates the various kinds ofassociated riskProvides a list of majority of risks; Clearly articulates the various kinds ofassociated riskProvides a list of majority of risks; Clearly articulates the various kinds ofassociated riskProvides a satisfactory list of all risks, with some risks missing; Includes differentkinds of associated risk, but some may not be clearly articulatedProvides a satisfactory list of all risks, with some risks missing; Includes differentkinds of associated risk, but some may not be clearly articulatedIdentifies some basic risks in each category and provides a basic understanding ofassociated risksIdentifies some basic risks in each category and provides a basic understanding ofassociated risksNo or limited addressing of risks, focusing only on surface-level or obvious risks atthe most; Addresses only some of the categories of risksNo or limited addressing of risks, focusing only on surface-level or obvious risks atthe most; Addresses only some of the categories of risks3 / 5Assesses the likelihood of the risk being realisedRealistically and accurately estimates the probability of all risks identifiedRealistically and accurately estimates the probability of all risks identifiedEstimates accurately the probability of all risks identified, although a smallomission might be presentEstimates accurately the probability of all risks identified, although a smallomission might be presentEstimates accurately the probability of all risks identified, although an error mightbe presentCREDIT(3)PASS+(2.75)PASS(2.50)UNSATISFACTORY+(2)UNSATISFACTORY(1)CRITERION 3 (20%)HIGH DISTINCTION+(5)HIGH DISTINCTION(4.50)DISTINCTION+(4)DISTINCTION(3.75)CREDIT+(3.50)CREDIT(3)PASS+(2.75)PASS(2.50)UNSATISFACTORY+(2)UNSATISFACTORY(1)CRITERION 4 (20%)HIGH DISTINCTION+(5)Estimates accurately the probability of all risks identified, although an error mightbe presentProvides some pragmatic consideration to the probability of the risks identified,with some inaccuraciesProvides some pragmatic consideration to the probability of the risks identified,with some inaccuraciesOver- or under-estimates the probability of the risks identifiedOver- or under-estimates the probability of the risks identified2.50 / 5Assesses its impact (consequence)Realistically and accurately estimates the severity of all risks identifiedRealistically and accurately estimates the severity of all risks identifiedEstimates accurately the severity of all risks identified, although a small omissionmight be presentEstimates accurately the severity of all risks identified, although a small omissionmight be presentEstimates accurately the severity of all risks identified, although an error orinaccuracy might be presentEstimates accurately the severity of all risks identified, although an error orinaccuracy might be presentProvides some pragmatic consideration to the severity of the risks identified, withsome inaccuraciesProvides some pragmatic consideration to the severity of the risks identified, withsome inaccuraciesOver- or under-estimates the severity of the risks identifiedOver- or under-estimates the severity of the risks identified5 / 5Assesses the risk levelAll items comprehensively and appropriately assessedHIGH DISTINCTION(4.50)DISTINCTION+(4)DISTINCTION(3.75)CREDIT+(3.50)CREDIT(3)PASS+(2.75)PASS(2.50)UNSATISFACTORY+(2)UNSATISFACTORY(1)CRITERION 5 (20%)HIGH DISTINCTION+(5)HIGH DISTINCTION(4.50)DISTINCTION+(4)DISTINCTION(3.75)CREDIT+(3.50)CREDIT(3)All items comprehensively and appropriately assessedMajority of items assessed appropriatelyMajority of items assessed appropriatelyMost significant items assessedMost significant items assessedMost items assessedMost items assessedIncomplete assessmentIncomplete assessment2.75 / 5Realistic risk management planThoroughly considers various options to mitigate all risks identified. Selectsappropriate mitigating actions for each risk, clearly based on the prior riskidentification and assessmentThoroughly considers various options to mitigate all risks identified. Selectsappropriate mitigating actions for each risk, clearly based on the prior riskidentification and assessmentConsiders various options to mitigate all risks identified, although might omit someinformation. Selects appropriate mitigating actions for each risk, clearly based onthe prior risk identification and assessmentConsiders various options to mitigate all risks identified, although might omit someinformation. Selects appropriate mitigating actions for each risk, clearly based onthe prior risk identification and assessmentConsiders various options to mitigate risks identified, although makes some smallerrors. Selects appropriate mitigating actions for each risk, based on the prior riskidentification and assessment, but some information might be missingConsiders various options to mitigate risks identified, although makes some smallerrors. Selects appropriate mitigating actions for each risk, based on the prior riskidentification and assessment, but some information might be missingPASS+(2.75)PASS(2.50)UNSATISFACTORY+(2)UNSATISFACTORY(1)Provides some options to mitigate most of the risks, but some errors orinaccuracies are evident. Selects mostly appropriate mitigating actions; Somewhatconsiders the prior risk identification and assessmentProvides some options to mitigate most of the risks, but some errors orinaccuracies are evident. Selects mostly appropriate mitigating actions; Somewhatconsiders the prior risk identification and assessmentMinimally explores options to mitigate risks; Only explores options for the mostbasic risks. Selects some inappropriate mitigating actions; May select actionssolely based on cost or ease of implementationMinimally explores options to mitigate risks; Only explores options for the mostbasic risks. Selects some inappropriate mitigating actions; May select actionssolely based on cost or ease of implementation

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